This Poem was Submitted By: Debbie Ann Bracelin On Date: 2002-11-08 02:08:07 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The night talks

  Darkness envolepse myself   The world is grey and the spirit of  my home is silent ,is this good or a   warning of future dismay  She walks silently lost and alone  She comes to me and wants to go home  I cannot help  her, I  do not no how  but I tell her I  am not in fear        He sleeps ,,inn blissfull repose  mysellf I  walk the house, no sleep for self amanda is wandering ,lost and alone mmyself I am tttrying to send her home      This poem is a exp.  but real ,, I know that my spelling and punc. is off   but it is 230 in the   morning and I  am sort of a wake ,not realy , I  just want some feedback

Copyright © November 2002 Debbie Ann Bracelin


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