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The night talks Darkness envolepse myself The world is grey and the spirit of my home is silent ,is this good or a warning of future dismay She walks silently lost and alone She comes to me and wants to go home I cannot help her, I do not no how but I tell her I am not in fear He sleeps ,,inn blissfull repose mysellf I walk the house, no sleep for self amanda is wandering ,lost and alone mmyself I am tttrying to send her home This poem is a exp. but real ,, I know that my spelling and punc. is off but it is 230 in the morning and I am sort of a wake ,not realy , I just want some feedback |
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