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You start at slender feet; tickling – caressing your way up, slipping over calves… I shiver with anticipation, as you pause at quivering knees. I grab for you and pull you up… Greedy for more! I am rapt in my yearning to savor; the rasping feel of you devouring me. You linger at milky thighs. Spiraling awareness has me convulsing; Contorting upon the bed. My need for you is fervent! My desire for you insatiable! Struggling, I Lift receptive hips; finally I am surrounded by you. I moan, as you wrap yourself around me. Encasing me tightly. Captured by the wonder of your warm snug sheath; I whimper and pull you close. I gasp! As I surrender to the sensations; Spilling thru my stomach. I can’t breathe! As I lay there worn, And spent upon the bed. Waiting for feelings of comfort and security to wash over me. God, I love my jeans!
Was it good for you? I wrote this for a challenge: write a love poem about an inanimate object. I posted it just for fun, but as always I’m happy to hear your comments and suggestion.
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