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Entwined - body and soul.

Entwined their bodies lay over a year. Please, please my darling, won't you trust in fate? Still, her mind was completely full of fear. Down her cheek ran a single tiny tear. How much longer should her heart have to wait entwined? Their bodies lay. Over a year, praying always that the end not be near. Her love would surely make him be her mate  still. Her mind was completely full of fear, he would not lend a sympathetic ear. He came late to each and every date. Entwined, their bodies lay over a year, his arms wrapped tight, holding her close and dear. Her cheek against his chest to hear his heart rate still her mind. Was completely full of fear, thinking his love might never reappear; in its place a great, unforgiving hate. Entwined their bodies lay over a year, still her mind was completely full of fear.

Copyright © May 2003 Jillian K Sorenson

Additional Notes:
My first villanelle...please suggest improvements, I don't usually write anything but free verse. :)


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