This Poem was Submitted By: DerrickT Heath Tyson On Date: 2003-07-24 19:54:54 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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drained and eroding

drained and eroding       caught  between the sand        slipping on the vague quest   where the              moon chills the qualm          ( of death                  )                           ( disputing the            sun (zodiacs are feign) randomly breathing  xenon is ferocious muggy & sticky in the south

Copyright © July 2003 DerrickT Heath Tyson

Additional Notes:
i have just been experimenting with writing exercises lately, and i came up with this one out of the blue. no punctuation intended. let the critiques begin! :)


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