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The SWAG Method Are man and beast, one in the same? If gestation’s allowed, you’re given a name At what point does a child emerge? Does it depend on the sake of the urge? Science is the origin of this query Is a zygote a human life or merely theory? The argument based on when life is viable Offers the option of when to be liable A blueprint is a blueprint, to build what end, Consequence or genetics is a message we send Damn Hilter’s desire for the perfect race, But, abortion can give it dignity and grace Life can be started in a sterile dish Fulfilling a heartache’s dearest wish Life can be stolen from the womb Discarded away in a hazardous tomb An educated mind draws this conclusion, So what of faith makes the confusion? Is life really to become a metaphor As justification for the life we bore? It is not religion that dictates this strife, But, tolerance, greed or apathy towards life It’s not politics, Pro-Life or Pro-Choice, We all suffer the loss of one tiny voice Why is it when it begins that is suspected? All life has real value when it's respected America’s children are dying to defend this, On foreign lands and in the surgical abyss I shall grieve each loss as it will unfold, With a hero’s recognition or the stories untold |
Additional Notes:
The SWAG Method is a term used for making a "scientific wild ass guess".
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2003-10-05 15:57:47
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.56250
Excellent questions to begin this poem. You have given me food for thought and
that is what poetry is all about making your reader think. You have created
a freeform poem that is presented evenly. The question I see that runs
throughout your poem is life, What is it all about? What is exceptable in how
we deal with the life of others? Words used help to put stregth to the questions.
Outstanding and this is the type of poetry this reader likes. Well done Andrea.