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Nativity At 25 degrees Fahrenheit, urine freezes on a park bench. Feces becomes cloaked slush, before glittering holiday windows, the Coca Cola Claus, and Rudolph's nose blinking on, and off. Filthy bundles of clothes, emaciated stick figures, remain hidden in cardboard caves, their blued fingers fisted against the cold. Clouds of stinking breath frost rotted teeth. Who am I to redeem this sorry crèche? All the sheep have been slaughtered. In eight days, the monkey comes. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2003-10-07 22:24:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.45098
What impact you have given this reader. You have shown the plight
of the homeless so well during the holiday season. You have made
this reader think about what they take for granted not knowing that
there is something better out there for them. The presentation of
this poem was simply great. A job well done and a great poem.
Thanks for sharing no suggestions here. Tom