This Poem was Submitted By: Irene E Fraley On Date: 2003-11-18 07:44:02 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Crucible Confusion

crucible of lamb co-existing with talons of lion chasing the immortal eleven headed grail stars warp crimson before you, crucifix charting fearlessly the known universe as strings wobble creation. Needle through gridded creation create travel to the sweet Lamb. Time now reverses our universe roaring mathematical truth of the lion No more a plastic universe nor wooden cup of mortal grail. Where then is the marked grail handling all of instant creation hanging on a blue crucifix? Such a strange rack of lamb to place him separate from the lion  right-justifying the universe. Up the universe! which dimension holds the grail? Strings sing the holy lion placing law before creation. Here a miniature nano lamb decorates infinitesimal nano crucifix. Will wobbles prove the crucifix or disarray our universe? Strange, empty, lamb to give credit to the grail to mitigate all of creation. Should it not be the Lion? Take the power of the lion law as shown in crucible of crucifix appropriating all of creation, demanding one book, a one path universe. What would be the lion’s grail without a vision of dying lamb? Faith is lamb, physics the lion knowledge the grail, religion the crucifix. Together they sing of universal creation.

Copyright © November 2003 Irene E Fraley

Additional Notes:
Someone challenged me to write a poem without any cliches, and I was watching a program on string theory and thinking about the Bible. Therein lies the confusion.


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