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Freedom Dead men do not speak But their voices cry For the unborn meek Who'll not live to die In a world so bleak That the blessed sigh And the wicked seek Refuge, judgment nigh. Nuclear nightmare. We all know the fear, Being born so bare, Already, death so near, Begins with a dare, Ends beneath a tear In death's gloomy lair Where judgments are clear. Tallest men be small, Greatest, so humble, Before trumpet's call When walls will crumble And structures will fall From final rumble Of warrior's ball, When warheads grumble My sorrow is great, My heart so heavy With grief for the fate Of humanity; But, is it too late For my sanity? I choose not to hate Therefore, I am free. |
Additional Notes:
Another one from my "early" collection, some twenty years ago.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Jordan Brendez Bandojo On Date: 2004-02-04 18:29:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.93939
Hi Bobby,
I'm glad to see your writing twenty years back, were you not yet in the graphics poem at that time?
This one is the simplest form of your pieces. I like the rhyming pattern. It is pleasing to the ear
when read aloud. Every line is short, I could not imagine how your simple poems become complex as
what you have now with your graphic poems!
A very great impact is created in the first input you have;
"Dead men do not speak
But their voices cry "
Something deep in it. You depicted darkness so with the second stanza "nuclear nightmare".
Authentic phrasing with "death's gloomy lair".
Dramatic is the ending. From the darkness of death you established the association of the
idea of freedom. I could just relate the idea that because of fighting for freedom some
great men became dead and they no longer speak yet their voices cry.
Thanks for sharing this to us, Bob!
Jordan