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black as night, steely gray, blue too or ivory white, salmon pink, banana yellow, rosey red spring green cheep, croak, damn, meow crack, whoosh, splish, whir caw, woof, wah, mommy rrrrrr, schreech, smash silky soft, furry, fuzzy, rough, hard, jagged, smooth, wet, greasy chapped, brittle smoky, putrid, stale, sour fresh, clean, pure sweet, spicey, bland delicious, yucky sight hearing touch smell taste metal, rock, wood, mammal hate, mistrust, greedy, selfish love, caring, generous, sharing the five basic senses and we are what we are, unless we choose to be better
I have nothing else to do but preach Suggestions for titles please (aside from Trash...Rubbish is acceptable)
This Poem was Critiqued By: Erzahl Leo M. Espino On Date: 2004-03-07 19:10:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.71429
Hi Mick, I have also nothing else to say in your entry here except that this is rich with words, adjectives, images, sounds and colors. What really strikes me best is the last line: “and we are what we are, unless we choose to be better” --- This reminds me of my May 2003 entry “No Excuses”. This just summarized it up. The “words, adjectives, images, sounds and colors” that you early mentioned were choices that we can select from. It’s how we choose that makes who we are. Simple as that yet with great impact! And for the title, hmmmm….I would suggest “Essence of the Senseless Sense”. :) As always, Erzahl :)
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