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a glimpse, a view Dark, tree-lined road, tunnel to freedom promise of a kiss good night, full of stars! in the morning strap existence on my back and begin to walk, to search for the feeling, such life the breath that brings the colors vivid to my eyes the breath that we’ll take as we climb, together I share this with you only moments, but they can never be used up and we will see, as we peek out from our path at gaping vastness, a discovery that side by side breath matching breath is practically one |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Regis L Chapman On Date: 2004-03-02 10:47:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.17857
I like this poem as it seems like it could be several things as the specific object of the poem. It could be a loved one, a spiritual life, or just a walk outside for the first time in a while in springtime.
I like the inclusion of breath, as well as a consistent emphasis on 'we'-ness. Very well done.
Thanks,
REEG!