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untitled - from Nov 2003 Dark whispers of blood-soaked dreams cling with the stickiness of spiders webs and the persistance of commissioned salespeople relentless, undaunted, unstoppable determined to make an impression Spitting out copper and shitting out gold shedding the skin begging for forgiveness yet denying the sins Imaginary gods and figments given substance by faith or by delusion throughout the ages, seemingly endless and enmeshed to us Pink elephants to lighten the dark soul, drowning in addictions Gods and Goddesses, imbued with lifeforce by the changing faces of humanity By some who crave a figurehead to console, to love, to protect, to dole out punishment By others who need to believe in something more than themselves to feel safe existing, or by themselves requiring our faith in them to maintain their own bramd of tangible intangibility and even by the non-believers who pander to both sides of the court, striving for the best alliance False idols and superstitious beliefs, held tightly to the breast like a cherished, tattered teddy bear, with no eyes so that the days are less empty and the nights have more light Belief beyond oneself larger than life |
Additional Notes:
The only other place this appears is on my website, though it is up in its original form. This onw was slightly edited.
Though I can't recall if there is a way to center poems when posting them here... so keep in mind it ought to be centered.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Regis L Chapman On Date: 2004-06-01 23:37:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
It's not entirely unhopeful piece, but sure reeks with the challenges of the modern life. I think of Pink Elephants in Disney cartoons and Tony Hawk Pro Skater 4.
I like to think of work like this as a bit of a bitter pill I needed to get up before it rotted me inside. I don't know if you would agree, but that's what I think of.
I agree with the sentiments in here, although I feel more hopeful mostly than the tone of this work. Still, I am not free of it without some effort.
Thanks,
REEG!