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Photo of an Unknown Relative The dress, loose around her ribs and chest, is enough to hide well shaped legs. But her feet are the mace on a nutmeg, cleaving to a round stone near the shore. With her arms spread wide, cupped hands hold the world in a ballet of open space. As if to say: you too can stand here like a water mirror and see our future, you too can be beautiful by seeming still. She is undeniable. The smile is the one I will give when I arch my hands to hold the world. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2004-08-01 20:38:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.76471
And the world shall be yours one day. Psalm by Arnie!
Good one though. I have seen many a picture such as you have word painted. Seems my mother had
such a one. "But her feet ..." . I liked that very eloquent phrasing. Very original. And did
you ever find out who she is or was?
Thanks.