This Poem was Submitted By: Cindy J Davis On Date: 2000-06-11 23:10:03 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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ETERNITY

What is Forever? It is your wings to help me fly through the heavens now ignited by the echo of your sigh When the edge of your lip  finds the crevice of my soul your hands so softly mold me and form  seams that make me whole Where is Forever? I found it in a tear what used to be a solid wall has shed itself of fear No longer do I seek to find the 'me' I could call 'real' you peeled away the sheath of stone I trust all that I feel Can this really be Forever? I can only tell you now my heart is free to love you from your strength it has learned how Your arms are where I yearn to be your touch all I desire the pretense built of pain is gone replaced with raging fire What is Forever? It is your wings to help me fly

Copyright © June 2000 Cindy J Davis

Additional Notes:
Rewrite from previous month...again, thank you, but I want it to be perfect, so please critique honestly! I can take it (snif, snif)LOL


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