This Poem was Submitted By: Kenneth R. Patton On Date: 2004-10-12 08:07:49 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Found (First poem challenge)

A sad, broken young boy in a photograph stood    looking at the ground. Teary eyed, mortified, siblings all around. What sadness, how awful, you wonder what could     in the middle of a crowd Cause such pain and agony, born without a sound. A sad little old man with a photograph stood    with no-one else around Teary eyed, horrified, terror all around! What blackness! how awful, you wonder what could    make such man so cowed and cause such pain and agony that in his soul abounds. That man and that boy from the photograph stood   making not a sound Teary eyed, satisfied, a new life they have found    How wonderful! what happiness, you wonder how could    such a  man have vowed  Hand in hand that boy and man will stand together proud.

Copyright © October 2004 Kenneth R. Patton

Additional Notes:
this is the first poem that spewed forth from me in the "throes" of recovery. I'll never forget sitting at the computer wondering where the hell that came from? I know it was triggered by an old picture of myself and the broken child who was saved but I had no intentions of writing about it. This was previously submitted


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