To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!
Contentment Time will forget this moment allowing its endless linger, deathless in my mind. Leaning back, bewitched at the sight staring fish eyed and wide, entranced. I watch the moon explode into fuchsia-white light over an abysmal yearning sea, desperately eager in the night. A starlit blaze of glory vibrating hemispheres, hovering bright. Divine incandescence beaming with heroic might. Yes, time will forget this moment and linger it will, deathless in my mind. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Jennifer j Hill On Date: 2005-06-06 19:04:35
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Audrey,
I know the contest is almost over , but I wanted to at least let you know how much
I have enjoyed reading and rereading "Contentment".
It's a nice title about a subject I myself hold dear.
What more could anyone want then to watch as the sun exits and the stars and moon
come out over the ocean. In all the world there is nothing which can charm me more.
Thanks for posting this one and good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Jennifer