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let me hold you Come here and let me hold you, and carry what you can’t hold. Wipe your tears away, And hear the story, your face has told. Let me lay with you- knowing I am there, Gentle touches - run my fingers through your hair. What tomorrow brings, I surely cannot say. But I have you… here, right now -today. Let me squeeze you, hoping I can peel away the pain. For surely if I could, I’d ease you - again, and again. I’ll say I’m sorry, because it’s what you need to hear. I’ll rub your back and love you - because I want to be near. If I knew a way to fix things, I would You know I would heal you, if I only could. So, let me wipe your tears away, And hear the story your face has told. Come here, let me hold you, And carry what you can’t hold. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2005-09-05 13:23:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.58974
Christina,
How great you are to say this...
So many people could use your hand upheld.
Physically, emotionally, spiritually.
I feel I could helps too, but then I get so bogged down,
I can hardly help myself.
I think this poem is almost saintly.
I think you must have written this for a loved one,
wouldn't it be grand if this desire to give help extending
to everyone?
good job....
Dellena