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An Old Leather Chair Tenderly in a mother's arms A child suckles without alarm The cradle of that child fair, Maternal breast and an old brown chair. A lullaby is faintly sung With echoes from a familiar tongue. We glance away and witness too clear The danger lurking terribly near. A silent eye peers beyond The window glass, a shattered bond. Fury feeds where once was joy Rage mercilessly rips away the boy. The perfect scene, diminished to naught Kaleidoscope tears in memory sought. A single slash the leather bare, A stain of red, the past is here. A childhood lost in solitary act. A future crumpled by forgotten pact. The chair remains, melody gone A grown-up hums the mother's song. Locked behind bars of steel Three lives condemned, two left to feel. |
Additional Notes:
I submitted this very late last month and only received two critiques. Resubmitting for hopefully a little more exposure and imput.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2005-12-01 14:00:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.20000
Marsha,
I got the sense of the old brown chair turning into an electric chair. Not sure if you meant that. I came to this poem thinking about sitting back with a beer. And came away with my heart stroked. Good job.
Mark