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Ingredients A flicker of a candle A pitcher's porcelain handle The first, a brief moment The other, delicate hardly touched The table made of teak The doorway with a creak One, is so solid Second, a reminder The soul, for a moment The heart, so delicate the soul, touched by afffection the heart, breaks if disheartened The body, a solid form The mind, the reminder The body, rises to face essense The mind, helps us with wisdom Ingredients for Love... |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Jordan Brendez Bandojo On Date: 2005-12-25 21:32:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
Hi Thomas,
It is my pleasure to have read your poetry again. This one is short but full of essence in life. The way you depict the message is effective. You use concrete things for us visualize. Thanks for sharing, Tom.
Regards,
Jordan