This Poem was Submitted By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2006-01-06 14:25:14 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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falsehoods. false prophet. just false!

Preacher, preacher Tell me the truth (what's truth?) You speak with forked tongue Do you speak for God? Or for yourself? (I hope no-one is listening)                   to your crap                   your regurgitated bull shit!             You have no more insight    into the heavens    than I do! I am sickened by self righteous                       pompous                       arrogant                       so called                       holy men! Be holy        AND SHUT UP!

Copyright © January 2006 arnie s WACHMAN

Additional Notes:
A man called Pat Robertson; a so called preacher...said that Ariel Sharon's stroke was because it was God's will and quoted some old testament biblical passage (which escapes me). This idiot is supposed to have one million followers. How sad.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Paul H. Roefs On Date: 2007-01-18 05:31:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Arnie, I'm back, or maybe I should say, I am thinking of restoring my efforts in poetry writing . I have been very busy with my busines and I have been feeling a painful tog at my heart for not do the things I love, like writing and reading poetry. I was checking to see if old fiends at TPL were still around. I am a little embarassed to utter to confession, that I have not been contributing to TPL, after all to help I received from people like yourself, as I began writing. I won't make excuses, but I will promise to come back with new work and read your poems as well as others at TPL. TWith that said. I just read your poem, " Falsehoods, False pophets. Just false". I like what you said and how you said it. The self proclaimed Holy-men, who boast of their closeness to God, are mostly arrigant jerks. We may be made in the image of God and that doesn't make one Holy. You said it well and their are few who have the guts to speak about such issues. Great piece of honest thoughts. Thanks My best to you, Paul


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