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Within a scale Power, knowledge of facts, completion of a goal without fear A side of the spectrum Selfish, no concern, me, me, me… Social looking for acceptance, needing understanding, looking for familiar surroundings A facet of the spectrum Inward looking, placing one above others… Structure, without deviation, no alternatives selected, outcome doesn’t matter A boundary of the spectrum Robotic, without thinking just following a path without thought… Analytical, evaluating all things around, never reaching the end Without limit to the spectrum Depth never reached; surface the only real encounter, lost in spirit… Each is a form of the person that withdraws from life’s nutrients Never accepting the inevitable, with open arms… |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2006-07-30 13:33:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thomas,
There is high/low, up/down, aand in between on the spectrum.. We are a bit of this, a bit of that
and some of everything. And yes rarely do we completely surrender to the inevitable......death.
Life's nutrients are what? food, water, air, spirit?
I think you could explain your meaning a bit more?
But then again this enigma may be the purpose?
Thought filled as usual Thomas....
Keep them coming.
My best
Dellena