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Spring I met a man whose memory was lost and envied him, my longing to be new cheated. His accident of brain became my instant prayer for inconsistency, my new grail, like Christ’s appeal against false prophets, those who, to speak to you, ply used signs so you won’t have to think again. This man had none of that. He was made fresh, said nought and cared less: I was wild, thumping in the rut of history, proving live that point of reference is a mighty blade: to have it, makes us; to not, makes us new. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2006-12-03 16:49:51
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
Hi Mark......thanks for posting and sharing.....the title Spring fits well........my most favorite season is Spring for it is a new beginning for most everything........after winter's nap the earth comes alive and so do we. easy word flow which keeps me reading on. God Bless, Claire