This Poem was Submitted By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2006-12-08 09:50:51 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!
A Christmas Card May the day of His birth
Bring to you a heart that is full
With exquisite love to slake your soul
Drink deep of silence that is the night
And the holiness that becomes His rite
May you see glories of Christmas dawn
Embrace the sun bright mountain’s throng
Snow shall fall like white Chantilly lace
And shine His light with infinite grace
On the day of His birth
|
|
Copyright © December 2006 marilyn terwilleger
Additional Notes:
Happy Holidays Days TPL
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2007-01-07 11:52:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I know this is late but at least I'm getting back into it. I appreciate your sentiments here though I am not a believer in Christ. Your words are simply put and understandable. I may add one thing...there is only snow in half the world! Happy holidays.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2006-12-31 01:12:47
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn,
Sorry I haven't had a chance to reply sooner, I love this. Thank you for such nice and heartfelt thoughts this Christmas. You've really helped to bring in the Season's greetings.
Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2006-12-17 00:10:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Marilyn,
Nice like Chantilly lace!
Snow can be beautiful and such and yet so deadly for mountain climbers.
Your poem is feminine and gentle and loving.
It could be a Christmas card.
I just wish we lived in such a wonderful place.
Peace to all is my dream.
Thanks for wonderful 'card'.
Hope your days are blessed with love.
A friend
Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas Edward Wright On Date: 2006-12-11 02:40:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Thanks M
t
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2006-12-09 03:59:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Beautifully stated poet and may the peace, love and joy of the Christmas season remain in your heart all year long. No matter what the season is Jesus is the reason for celebration of LIFE......both physical and spiritual. Your words are well felt. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2006-12-08 10:48:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
What sweet and sentimental thoughts! This is a nice Christmas card. I think your friends will enjoy it. I can't find my dictionary and don't know the word 'slake', so if you want to, you can enlighten me on that one.
I'm really glad that you chose to send us wishes that included Jesus. This year people have become so radical about it! I will maintain that Christmas should be for those who believe in Him.
Thanks for sharing this with us! It's good to get a card and fun to share your own.
Merry CHRISTmas Marilyn!
Poetry Contests Online at The Poetic Link
Click HERE to
return to ThePoeticLink.com Database Page!