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Winter Ice From my back porch exposed branches dip, wave and weave, trees ashamed without their summer leaves. Silhouettes of willows shiver and dance to nature’s brush of ice and snow. Summer flowers are netted in frost. Frozen threads of water held by eaves, as sharp, quick air sweeps and scrubs and sparrow’s nests are ice embossed. From my back porch and across the glebe, vacancy meets my swing. Faded with age its rope slumped and frayed, the splintered seat bowing to windy whorls. Memory sways above grass’ green. From my back porch I hear white silence of the snow as tearful willows nod to winter ice. Within serenades of stillness, and inside this wonder, beats my heart |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-02-24 19:07:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn,
This is soooooo lovely.
I love the cold forlorn view to the outside from your porch.
Your descriptions were delicious/unpretentious. I love the old swing.
quote; the splintered seat bowing to windy whorls.
I feel like I see it!
And I know your feeling of aloneness....
You may know many people who come and go but you feel almost empty inside.
There is a place inside where love resides and yearns. I have one too.'
The only thing that fills it is when I give love to anyone/everyone.
And then I'm full.
I can't wait for it to come to me. When I'm so miserable I'm tough to be aroun.
I'm rambling......
I wished one thing different.....a different word than wonder.....maybe beauty/something more special
You are so blessed we need a more appreciative word!
and inside this wonder, inside this God's glory?
beats my heart
Dellena