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lost roads that lead me in circles to dead ends, one-way streets going nowhere i drift listlessly, restless, careless as the wind blows without direction, without destination, without purpose or meaning. people i meet are like shadows. formless, faceless, ever-changing. they guide me, use me, hurt me with careless words and thoughtless acts. somehow, they are able to thrive in this world through malice, deceit, ignorance. this world where honor, integrity, and truth are flaws, weaknesses, and faults. where compassion, concern, and tolerance invite greed, hatred, and violence. trust is guarded, hope is stifled, and all that is taught as truth is a lie. this is life? |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-04-07 17:51:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.92857
Charles,
This is very good although a bit upsetting.
You put into words all the flaws of man. We treat each other as oponents rather than allies.
Mans inhumanity to man seems to thrive as todays theme.
I believe we havebeen fed an unimaginal amountof lies.
Ive lived long enough to finally see a bit ofthe outright deceit.
I like your verbage. direction-less/no destination/no purpose.
Trust has to be guarded, hope is smashed, life is lessened.
I believe with such evil about we all must be watchful and leary.
hopefully times will improve.
You're poem had an energy of it's own. It helped me experience your thought.
Very good poem Charles.
Dellena