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Bauble Less Winter's skeleton silhouettes against the sky showing it's bare to bones basics. Backdrop lit showing, creases, folds, curves and sways of naked branches. Details unnoticed with foliage dressing. Beneath all coverings, lies purity. No need to be more than what it is. No need for baubles, bells, or lights. Only the intrinsic need to be must be… |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-03-31 09:19:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.93750
Beautiful way to expose the wear of winter snow and gusts of winds as Spring bursts forth.......the earth awakening in so many different ways indeed baubles are not needed for they arrive in due time as does birth and this time of the year makes me think of new life.......the trees are empty of their new folliage but soon here in New England the trees will bud as they have already in other parts of the country. I enjoyed the images you have presented with your pen; I often think it reminds me of me..........need to get to work on those extra pounds winter left here in Tully. Thanks for posting my friend; you can always be counbted on to burst forth with the best. God Bless, Claire