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I Wish If I could grant wishes what would I do? Spring is a treasured gift, lazy warm days gleeful gardens birds in love, and us. Even surprised widows deep breathe. Summer would be welcome, hot ribbons of air flip magnolia leaves trees stretch to touch blue. We could languish in repose, as one. Autumn would be very nice a warm hearth, rapture hot apple cider and cinnamon tubs of apples, bobbing. Arms that encircle and sooth. Winter makes a good gift soft warm counterpanes skaters arm in arm, skimming snowflakes falling, silent. Two lovers keep flames of fire alive Only God grants a wish but I would if I could, wouldn’t you? |
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An old poem I stumbled upon....
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2007-08-11 05:39:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
You bet I would!! And I love your wishes. So unselfish and so beautiful. You make each season a joy. Making life wonderful. Yes, I truly like your wishes.
Rene'