This Poem was Submitted By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2007-11-15 09:11:23 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Must Be

What tunnel did I stumble in with all its grace,              and colors of the hue? What cavern do I see and embrace,              with its glitter of magenta and blue? What radiant fire burns within this soul,              with its embers so orange and red? What magnificent bridge will I cross with its toll,              as passion and values are wed? What mountain will I climb to the top,              with its smooth and snowy peak? What river of dreams will I want to stop,              making me helpless and weak? What structure do I enter without a second thought,              with all of its marble floors? What room of knowledge will I be taught,              opening all the doors?                  It Must be Love

Copyright © November 2007 Thomas H. Smihula


This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-11-25 00:31:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.87500
Thomas, Everything of any world revolves around love. Any value of everything is love. Without even your self love all is for naught. Strength to carry on through adversity is bought by love. It must be love, it is because of love we grow. Doors open to love. Love encompasses Everything in the name of the Supreme Being..... Dellena


This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-11-19 08:56:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.93750
Beautifully penned poet and one whose words may travel in many different directions for the reader. Love all the colors you chose to represent the different ways one may go and indeed the closing line fits perfectly....thanks for posting, God Bless, Claire It is a shame no one is really critiquing or responding as they should. I pray everyone is doing well and will enjoy Thanksgiving as it should be.....God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2007-11-16 00:05:28
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Must be!! Love is a funny thing and very hard to describe in words but you have penned it perfectly. Rene'
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