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Existence In death there is peace, but all else is lost. In life there is turmoil, but all can be found. Emptiness is a void, nothing can be seen. Fullness a joy, where exhilaration spillth over... 'This is Life' |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-11-15 21:57:28
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90909
You certainly have a way with words Tom and indeed they certainly bring forth images created by the flare of your pen and the flow of those words.....makes me want to live life rather then to exist in it......actually it brought forth many other questions and thoughts as well pertaining to life and how we live it....thanks once more for posting, God Bless, Claire