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Green Christmas Purse Tucked inside my tiny drawstring green velvet purse With the hunter-green satin lining Is a wish of what I would like in my stocking Hanging from the mantel above a cozy fire On Christmas Eve. How to package such precious gifts is very complex! Please pack, oh, so carefully, as not to damage Even a tiny corner or rumple a feather! (Because feathers are so easily rumpled these days). Please wrap up love, so close I can feel you’re breath when I open it. Please tuck in the glow that thinking of you lets me wear each day. Please package a wink that makes me smile when I see your face. Stow there your heart that warms my insides when I think of you, So you can always steal me away from wherever I am. My purse will never leave my side until this season ends. Although I will be with you most every night, I cannot be sure If you wishes are the same as mine, But rest assured that the little box placed under your tree, Is what you want from me. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2007-12-06 23:44:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.80000
Lola,
What a beautiful Christmas wish! Who could ask for more. Your 3rd stanza alone could be a poem. Thanks for the read.
Rene'