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Sunrise to Sunset Dawn approached and past, as life has been lived Radiant colors of crimson appear, over the easterly landscape The road behind difficult; this treacherous path smoothes into one that lies ahead Light now gives one a sense of enrichment Knowing in all directions, hope resides beyond The soul senses that in each, a different amount of time, of travel required Noon, now generates it's warmth, causing pause The mind once again reflects, upon the moments spent Each contains a chapter within this circle of being within To continue, upon the journey, is to accept the tolls and dues, paid upon the earthly flesh The hand reaches back once again, to capture the thought hidden Frustration sends moisture, that permeates the brow One wipes, only to find more perspiration follows Droplets roll down these cheeks, cooling the senses The emotions seem to settle, steps reach greater depth The soul looking for a place to rest The breath becomes weaker life lived Suddenly pastels cross to the west This life form halts, to relish in the splendor of being Knowing darkness beyond will soon prevail in 'Dawn to Dusk' |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2008-01-07 02:20:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thomas
Nice work. Full of vivid imagery.
Best wishes
Mark