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This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-12-07 22:13:17 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My heartbeatâ€™s set to the rhythm of myself. Music innermost inhabits every breath. I am tuned to the orchestra of my pulse. When I suffer empty or my world caves in I change to wavelength of harmony within.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2008-01-07 10:59:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
Dellena, Depth within so few words this is the type of poetry that I enjoy making the reader contemplate. Well done, Thomas

This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-12-10 08:43:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
How wonderfully refreshing this one is Dellena, love the thought of music setting the pace withing one's being.......actually, since my heart surgery not only I but others near me can actually hear my heart beating and it is usually to a lovely slow pace where no fear or agitation comes near. It is nice too that you are able to change the wavelength of harmony within when something does go wrong. Your words also bring forth an image and feeling of calmness which is so often missed in this world of ours. Merry Christmas, continued penning and peace for the New Year.......God Bless, Claire

This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2007-12-09 11:27:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Hi D...What a great write this is! I love...I am tuned to the orchestra of my pulse...excellent. Such a melancholy flavor this poem has...however, your last line gives a ray of hope to the dolefullness. Beautiful...love it! Blessings....Marilyn

This Poem was Critiqued By: Mary J Coffman On Date: 2007-12-08 15:22:14
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Dellena... Such depth of feeling, and emotion woven into these lines! I adore the musical metaphor you use hear. You have taken what is often a much over-used metaphor, and individualized it into a fresh and unique perspective. The last two lines really sum it well, but i especially like line #3 "I am tuned to the orchestra of my pulse." Wonderful!! Thanks so much for sharing, my friend. I enjoyed this work very much! Best Always, Mary

This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-12-08 01:40:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Dellena, How peaceful, and such a reminder that we are so much more than all that is around us... Everyone has a birth song and it sounds like you found yours. I think this has to be one of your best if not the best...you've captured a philosophy with so few words yet words so well chosen that I found myself listening with you. Kudos! best, Lora

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