This Poem was Submitted By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2008-05-07 03:21:11 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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in the gallery

i'm one of the many who come here, more legion than fans at the football there is less certainty here than at the goal line why does that surprise me i fetch out all the flaws with my fingers, crooked: my standard is a ghost

Copyright © May 2008 Mark Andrew Hislop


This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2008-06-04 16:45:04
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Mark....Much as transpired since I left TPL and even before, however my dicision to return, I am sure, is obvious. No need to beat up on a dead horse so I won't go there. I am also sure, since my critiquing skills were maligned, I hesitate to comment on any poems. I do understand that sometimes my feelings get in the way of, what some would call, a good vs a fluff crit. Having said that I don't think your standards have become ghosts at all. If you and others like you don't 'fetch out all the flaws' how can any of us hone our craft? I hope you are well and will consider writing again...I have missed you. Mazza


This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2008-06-03 20:38:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Mark, Your standard is certainly not a ghost however it may not be as appreciated as it should. You set very high standards not only for yourself but for those around you and for some of us it is most difficult to reach that high. Yes, there should be no surprise and more certainty of quality given to opinions/reviews but alas you are dealing with us mere mortals who at best are so often inadequate in skills and delivery of words. As always, your format and word choices serve you well in your delivery of your message. I have read this several times but can find no nit nor fault with your work. I especially like "i fetch out all the flaws with my fingers, crooked: my standard is aghost"...it truly does sum up how you feel about your expectations. best to you always, Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2008-05-29 01:30:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.00000
Hi Mark, This is defiantely a different write which makes it more intersting because I wonder about the mystery in which the writer has penned here and what thought inspired this piece. I enjoyed reading this for the fact it made me think even deeper, trying to understand what you see. Awesome!! Rene'
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2008-05-24 21:02:34
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.80000
Interesting form you use along with the lack of capitalized words to begin each sentence with. it works well, the thoughts and images created with the flow of your pen are interesting within themselves. as always it is nice to find your work posted here on the link and we do look forward to more of the same. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-05-24 14:58:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Mark, I'm in the gallery with you! Interesting not capitalizing the start of your stanza? It caught my interest. This poem speaks to me of personal grace.The ghost being the supreme being. Fetching out flaws with crooked fingers, being questing toward rightness but imperfect. I'd almost title it 'In The Bleachers'. Love your mind, always love your work. Simple but profound. Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2008-05-07 08:30:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Yes, my young friend, there is never a victory for morality among narcissists. I recall the very last hope I held for my last marriage departing when the ex remarked with that dubious sigh so significant at times, "You and your morality". No, they certainly have no problem with standards...they simply ignore they exist. Just make a comment about someone's empty critique and you'll see. The gallery of finger painting. JCH
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