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At the last.... to have come so far and at times stood tall to have fought so hard to have lost it all the hard fact to face that there is no place no place left to stand no winning last hand all hopes and dreams soon cease to be as the last sun sets i am memory so goodbye to romance goodbye to blue skies goodbye to the evils goodbye to the lies goodbye to tomorrows goodbye to my love goodbye to the sorrows did ne'er rise above for the death blow has come one terrible fell swoop that not only splits the skull but bashes the brains and snaps the neck as teeth splinter... life crumbles |
Additional Notes:
i need a tissue i think. what is light without darkness anyway?--nothing.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-09-02 20:12:53
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Charles,
Being perfectly happy is so rare and short lived. Thank god for memories.
It sounds like the party involved just got his heart broken by someone he loved.
It is a death of dreams and visions of the future. No greater can be the loss,
but for death.
Sorry you experienced a sorrow hard to rise above.
You tell a short, sad, story, well.
Dellena