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Venting Outloud A sucker; happy every day through This world, Where we're surrounded daily by the ugliness that floats in the air. Emotions change often; The happy people who look happy; all the time are weird. Their masks are transparent; Phony faces make me feel sick. Damn show your emotions - and voice your opinions always. Instead of conforming to what you think is appropriate, Stand up, be true to who you are; and what you think. Bust out of the mold; of the brainwashing you've encountered. Trained to be..... Taught to be..... Pulled behind the the trains of life, Not even trying to think for yourself. Or question, doubt, or defy what people tell you, I've got to go; deep, down, in and out now. With the winds of forceful thinking Pushing me to new concepts and ideas, Far over the lines of who I was before. Happy every day, every minute is too left. I want to be right, write and say To hell with the empty headed blind assholes - who don't feel any emotion except for being happy in a world that is crumbling to pieces under their stupid little feet. |
Additional Notes:
No need to critique this because I'm using up credits, it's just self-expression that I'd like to put into a beautiful poem - with deeper meaning.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2008-09-17 22:59:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Deni,
No need to critique or not, thank you---so glad to see someone vent, I enjoyed the read and emphasized with you...
Lora