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Best of Friends As my words I write are true I know I often cry for you Those who read the words I write I hope to meet someday in life For all they see are my tears Insecurities, inner fears They never see my morning smile Which I wear once in awhile Nor hear the sounds of my laugh gentle memories of the past Yes, those who read the words I pen Only know me from within They never see the side of me That I wish they could see So, if you read the words I write You're more than special in my life And as my pen flows today Know I send my love your way For you my friend, know me well My deepest secrets, you I tell As others only know my mask You see me through crystal glass My thoughts, my pain, my worldly trials And now I share with you, my smiles |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-01-06 16:48:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
Rene,
Keep peeling, peeling, peeling. And you'll soon be pealing, pealing, pealing.
MSS