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Rachel's Marriage Five foot ten blonde with blue orbs twenty and six German and Irish Erect posture deliberate of movement gracious and forthright open and friendly countenance. Smiling with crisp porcelain enamels sure of herself and comfortable in the lace which shrouds her. Extending her hand to accept the gold ring offered as a symbol of undying love and fidelity. She accepts the symbol and returns the favor similarly lustrous, metallic and indestructible. Yet, to those who know her; the gold pales in comparison to her ethereal translucent beauty, and the metal is weaker than her resolve. I am not the only one who witnesses the physics of this union her regal head nods approval to all as she commits herself to her man. He is the dominative victor, humbly taking possession, Together they walk on facing the world, insurmountable, inseparable; a human bridge, which cannot be eroded or compromised, fashioned by two artisans in a filigree of sensibilities more intricate than watch works and more permanent than marble. Gerard A. Geiger (FOB) January 21, 2009 |
Additional Notes:
FOB....Father of the Bride, for those uninitiated few.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-01-26 08:35:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Congratulations to the Father of the Bride for sharing these beautiful images of your daughter and new son in law's very special day. One can hear the pride you hold for this very loving couple and I am certain they will treasure this forever. God Bless, Claire