This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-02-08 00:22:41 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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My Voting Record-January Points: 11.5789 To Walt Whitman submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-01-06 17:03:22
Points: 10.42101 The Children of Gaza submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-01-11 23:44:37
Points: 9.26312 Standstill Minutes submitted by Duane J Jackson on 2009-01-11 22:58:20
Points: 8.10523 Desert Paints submitted by Lora Silvey on 2009-01-19 19:24:04
Points: 6.94734 From One Time Traveler to Another submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-01-17 11:47:12
Points: 5.78945 Whistle submitted by Kenneth R. Patton on 2009-01- 10:49:35
Points: 4.63156 Circles submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-01-15 11:06:33
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Copyright © February 2009 Dellena Rovito
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2009-02-19 08:08:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Dellena,
I don't have an input about your voting selection but thought I would say hi and hope all is well with you!
Rene'
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-02-14 08:52:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
I was taken by Duane's concept in Standstill Minutes too. Kind of felt cheated he didn't progress the poem
just a little more. Mark's Whitman poem was an easy choice. He shows a love and penetration of the poet.
I would be a lot more impressed with Patton's work if he would universalize his message (or at least present
a message more.) Arnie was something of a rustic poet similar to Patton and once he began doing this, began
winning. I'd like to see him write an anti-war poem. In fact I'd like to see us all write more of those.
A thoughtful vote, Dellena, something we've all grown to expect from you.
JCH
This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-02-11 00:03:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Dellena,
Thank you for thinking so highly of 'standstill minutes'.
Take care,
Duane.
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