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Touchstone Capture a thought into transcendental tone to walk the mind further than else can alone Stir the stagnantly settled, old porridge for new little assured and less to know that's true. To buy belief a poet's perfect purpose is won with less than a bridge to brave a leap to the sun Is to own nothing but bitter remorse over what you have not done. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-02-28 16:34:48
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
James,
True, Poetry opens up anything is possible.
I like leaping into the sun.
Better to do something than be sad cause your spineless.
How can things change unless we take leaps of faith, failing maybe, but perhaps not.
You carry forth good messages that all should heed.
with your lead many will follow.
walk the mind always......
dellenA