This Poem was Submitted By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-06-07 02:00:49 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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My May Votes Points: 12.3684 Upon Conducting a Class for Poets submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-05-25 09:41:44
Points: 11.
156 Made of Ink submitted by Kenneth R. Patton on 2009-05-18 12:17:49
Points: 9.89472 Ne'er Paragon _/Revision W/Spelling Corrections submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-05-17
Points: 8.65788 Masquerade submitted by Lora Silvey on 2009-05-17 10:16:50
Points: 7.42104 In the Cell Next to Bishop Williamson submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-05-21
Points: 6.1842 In Shedding submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-05-15 23:50:10
Points: 4.94736 Heal - To Trust Is Bliss submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-05-16 14:42:46
Points: 3.71052 Patterns submitted by Regis L Chapman on 2009-05-27 21:06:35
Points: 2.47368 Body Count submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-05-26 18:58:58
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Copyright © June 2009 Duane J Jackson
Additional Notes:
I was very drawn to 'Made Of Ink' particularly because of what it said in so few lines. The metaphor was very original. Was one of Kenneth's best in a very long time.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2009-06-19 08:55:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Thank you Duane for your consideration of "Masquerade" last month. You made some fine choices...
L
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-06-12 20:08:48
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hello Duane;
Thanks for your votes on my poems; I was hoping for Ne'er Paragon to come in better than the other; but the voters counts make the difference. Hoping all is well with you; and that you have an uplifting weekend; and that you're writing - can't believe it's almost the middle of June already; & thank God it's been mildly warm here.
JC was outstanding in May; as well as MSS - I really liked Patterns too - and Lora is being true to herself & style of always grabbing my imagination with great writes. Take care,
blessings,
Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-06-09 09:08:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: Unknown
Duane,
I like your top three. Pretty solid selections.
Onward to June!
MSS
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-06-07 09:22:08
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I agree, I just wish he'd stop using the first person. Perhaps I discounted too much for that. Guess I'll
just have to accept him as rustic-poet-in-residence. Thank you for your generosity shown towards my very own.
It's good to see we agree on DeniMari's progress, easily the most improved poet of late.
JCH
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