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Fog? Look there, off between that fold of rolling green secured by sentry pines Can you see? the fog sweep down and hear the wind break through the trees as streams converging for a fall, from which arose the swirling mist, the fog no fog at all? |
Additional Notes:
Atop beautiful Mount Tamalpais, I watched this scene. For a moment, if I used my imagination,
it was as though the fog were something else, like a .....can you see it?
(I purposefully used "fog no fog" instead of the plural "not" which I thought would hinder the flow.
Besides, the hidden reference (if you see it) is a singular noun.
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