This Poem was Submitted By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-10-05 08:00:13 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My September Votes

 Points: 30.2941 The Night Sky submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-16 02:00:42  Points: 27.26469 Ventriloquist submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-24 16:09:19  Points: 24.23528 The Arrow submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-11 19:43:36  Points: 21.20587 Blood submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-09-25 01:06:55  Points: 18.17646 At Home with the Sleeping submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-06 15:02:41  Points: 15.14705 The tall ships submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-01 04:44:48  Points: 12.11764 Intervention submitted by Gordon Tibbles on 2009-09-27 01:12:45  Points: 9.08823 Destroyers submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-09-28 23:26:49  Points: 6.05882 To Withstand the Storm submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-09-14 23:49:07  Points: 3.02941 Steps submitted by Regis L Chapman on 2009-09-02 21:28:25

Copyright © October 2009 Duane J Jackson

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I'm sorry. I dont have access to the forum and hence submitting my votes for the month here.


This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-10-24 08:01:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Reasoned choices, my friend. Yes, our ban from the forum leaves us little resort. You know,Duane, there's something essentially outrageous about censorship with regard to literary effort, ANY KIND of censorship. There aren't any children here (that I can determine,) we are not in a crowded theatre and the last person, Troy Crotch, to threaten with a weapon, is gone. And I don't think he was banned...just shamed. But I did the unthinkable, I told a syncophant slobbering over a "poem" no more poetry than a shopping list, what he is. But then, when admonished by Chris, I referred to a record of what passed for "decency" commonly on the forum instead of kissing his ass. What did you do? (Curse God in Hebrew?) JCH


This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-10-05 12:42:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Guess dumb dumb here in Jersey forgot we were switching to that, I like this better - now that I've got the hang of it. Wondering what happened to Loras poem, I really like it. Great month here; men are back on board, and taking my breath away - poem by poem. Awesome group, awesome talent, blessings, Deni
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