This Poem was Submitted By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2010-01-07 22:41:45 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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My December Votes Points: 6.5789 Unseen Obvious submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-12-16 23:19:57
Points: 5.92101 Whitewashed submitted by Mary J Coffman on 2009-12-22 19:
:31
Points: 5.26312 Out The Shop Door submitted by Kenneth R. Patton on 2009-12-23 08:19:38
Points: 4.60523 Laugh a Little Lighter submitted by Ellen K Lewis on 2009-12-12
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Points: 3.94734 Winter Solstice submitted by cheyenne smyth on 2009-12-23 15:11:39
Points: 3.28945 Left Behind submitted by cheyenne smyth on 2009-12-03 15:47:56
Points: 2.63156 Stop Renting Space In My Heart submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-12-20 03:42:51
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Copyright © January 2010 Duane J Jackson
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2010-01-15 00:28:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hello Duane,
Thank you for voting for Winter Solstice and I am pleased you like it.
Best, cheyenne
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2010-01-11 11:31:48
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
I well appreciate your regard for Unseen Obvious, my friend. It is wonderful the effort you've
put into personally inviting poets back. Mary Coffman was approaching her own style (something
you've well attained) before she left and it would be a joy to watch as she picks up where she
left off. The breadth of imagery she has exhibited is a pleasure to behold. I hope she realizes
she's a born poet. But there are others here...
MSS, if you're listening...we need you. You have developed the penetrating critique we need most.
JCH
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-01-08 14:54:08
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.00000
Thanks for your vote Duane, but my illness has the quality I'd like to put in to my writes, less than it should be right now. I'm glad we both caught the talent of Cheyenne - can't wait to read more of her work.
Now we're one week in to January. Hopefully I'll get some ideas, and spend time reading them over a few times before I hit the submit button.
blessings,
Deni
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