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Infra If you want to know what the people will say speak: you will say it. The universe is too big to be created but make an apple: there's the universe. Oh, what your heart knows! Knows! And now I am your heart whispering in your ear that you know. Oh, that I could wrap your hands around the heart of your own heart you would see how the apple-seed expands sheltering birds and cows and men who seek the origin of it all oh! of it all. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: kevin Dunn On Date: 2010-10-31 02:48:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hello Mark.
This is the kind of writing I like to read over and over. Seems like 5 little separate poems that can be enjoyed together or in any order.Or used as epitaphs on grave stones
There is a lot of this around but most not as good as this. I for one would like you to explain it's meaning in detail to me so I can enjoy it some more.
Kevin,