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A Collection of Pain you are riding this angry horse too long the path doesn't go that far the pain isn't worth it you'll have to spend this anger by yourself we punish others emotionally for lack within ourselves not necessarily for their degree of guilt I know there is love between us yet. . . my heart feels only your scorn we've shaved the ice too thin ice juts of pain, crystallized in my mind preconceived thoughts translated into cold shafts of memory slipping, sliding, crashing into the frozen regions of my heart passages I do not want to travel loom before me. please. . . hold my hand and keep me from going I could climb a mountain reach the heavens tiptoe to embrace a cloud retrieve a star on a clear night to carry home to you except you would not believe it was a star from such a distance I m paralyzed with pain fear anger about our argument please. . . before the sun goes down touch me and see if I still breathe sometime between my teardrops and evening please tell me you love me tears have formed ice drops on my heart pain has seared holes in our relationship but a footstep a kind word could suddenly melt the ice and dry the tears oh please come and touch me where I hurt |
Additional Notes:
Ideally these pieces would all be on a separate page in a book but, this is not possible here. I did leave out all those. . . . . . . I like for effect so well. Let me know if it is better without them.
Mr. East, would you suggest punctuation any where in this work? Thanks
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