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Pick a Card Now’s the time I meet the gentle trickster, That dark foreboding star who sometimes downs His walk in grey apparel – suited to provoking Human frauds or bogus prophets some how Spawned from breeding pride – as his perception Constrains my sight to see false teeth and limbs That he deftly juggles before my eyes Conning my wallet, annoying my mind, He intertwines my walk with cruel testers Of every kind, hiding in blind alleys, But now our walk must leave those ancient caves, Hinderings by false appearance just seen To block my path with practical jokers. What truth will I later see when our trip Is over and he goes on to impose His pranks and trials on some other’s life? Will I out live his test of severity? |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-06-04 22:39:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
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