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channeling leadbelly same old people ain't nothing changed same old people still actin strange same old people all they wanna do same old people wanna take from you same old people ain't nothing new same old people what you gonna do? well you cant do nothing what ya gonna say? well you cant say nothing just hope and pray well it ain't done nothing time to go my way time to go my way time to go my way same old people where you gonna go? same old people on down the road same old people where you gonna go? same old people nobody knows same old people ain't nothing changed same old people still actin strange same old place no place to be same old place no good to me same old place ain't nothing to see same old place what you gonna do? well you can't do nothing what you gonna say? well you can't say nothing just hope and pray well it ain't done nothing time to go my way time to go my way time to go my way same old people it's time to go same old people won't see you no mo same old place it's time to go same old place you won't see me no mo |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2011-07-28 17:27:35
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
Hi Charles,
This is fabulous poem that should be set to music, it's a travesty not to do so! I found myself tapping my foot as I read your expressive words and wonder if you are musical as well as a poet. I like the dialect, the easy flow, the well chosen words and the theme. Well done.
Best wishes,
cheyenne