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For The "Good Guys" For Father Tom but there's that one thing, that one thing no need to mention it not one a once and done thing, either no need to speculate, my friend you know it, let's leave it i have my own most likely sex's involved shit, you went and mentioned it (it's the secret that ain't a secret. it's the mirror for ugly, the balance to blame) good guys my ass. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2012-09-03 23:12:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
OOOO MSS....
Its an awesome work. You got this reader fired up!! You set me up from the beginning, with "good guys" and Father Tom....
I like the way you brought the unmentionable thing right out into the open without ever stating the thing! You admission not to mention it is a pretty good point!
shit, you went and mentioned it
Very clever. A surprise smile in the midst of what I anticipate to be anguishing. It gave me time to take a deep breath and adjust my attitude as I continue reading.
it's the secret that ain't a secret. <obviously
it's the mirror for ugly, << cause for reaction from the reader, the emotion complete
the balance to blame) <<<< pondering...its very open...like a window shaded by shadows, leaving
me wondering...balance? measured by the weights of shame?
I like the style. The whole thing is provocative, and disgusting, and how ironic that you added a laugh. Nice work!
~smile~ Ellen