This Poem was Submitted By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2012-10-21 15:38:57 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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I have no right

I have no right to expect your love when I have exposed it to faithless acts I have done I can seek no course inward to you when I have sequestered my feelings behind absent ruminations I will not redeem false pretensions when I lied to myself and more importantly to you I will not feel blank admiration when what I have done rests in unremorseful repose I cannot forgive myself even a response when I can't even offer an apology to you I will not say anymore words  or meaningless silence when I cannot excuse my idiot remarks I will write no more nothing is better when expressions written or said hurt more than possible and feelings pay the price to observe. I love you.

Copyright © October 2012 Medard Louis Lefevre Jr.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2012-10-23 02:25:41
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Medard, I hope your love has a chance to know these things about you. I hope where ever there is love you shall find it. Keep writing. It sounds so very angry...anguished..lamenting.... but it needs to be said, does it not? Can you channel it into words that lift you up and make you feel better?? Just my thoughts. I hope you dont mind my saying. Still smileing! Ellen


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