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At Break of Day The dawn sets our limits; we try to break them. To wander where? Adorn them, then. You carry that silver light, lunar, cold-edged, quick, with wonder of your dark mother. Images claw against day’s drowning. Or salmon strong, leap at the wall, with living if a desperate spawn. What matter if our brothers count out the hours in tyranny? The Old Book, open at the outer limits in its horizon splendor, throws clouds and seagulls into the expanse, with their black shadows. There are crumbs for rodents, more for men. That more is less than all, and less then something more in morning’s larger still, whose gate with climbing ivy, hoar, beckons while it bars at the mansion’s start, indifferent to toil for room and board by the progeny of art. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-01-12 11:59:52
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Sounds to me that you have been there and done that. The prices we pay for the loyality to the art.
No prolems that I can see with the construction, flow or from.