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The Come and Go To take a thought from one point to another to reach an inside from further out than lamentation To bring some order to chaos, breathing in with living air to vacuum To know the design behind every living thing and where it points, where it rests upon Planets, suns, exalting the life they grow to purpose profound In this is the face of God. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2013-04-02 19:55:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.50000
James,
Thank you for posting such a time appropriate poem. I always enjoy reading your work though I don't seem to see much of it anymore. YOur structure, thought patterns and of course the elocution of your accomplished pen and the craft are as always spot on and then so much more. The depth of understanding and comprehension in this poem is phenomenal--such a wonderful gift you have, you brought the cosmos full circle with celestial bliss and sage knowledge...Kudos on your wonderful poem. Lora